Wednesday, February 24, 2010

Boy/Saxophone 2-11-10

Author's note-For our rapid write we listed qualities about a person and an inanimate object, then wrote a poem about both at the same time.

Complicated, beautiful
difficult, and creative.
Lips must be positioned
just right.

Such a child
so vunerable and prized.
But one scratch,
one tiny scratch,
will cost an arm and a leg
to get rid of.

Once secured to my neck
now placed safely in a case
My dream come true
will never know the real me.

2 comments:

  1. one of my faves! but there are so many amazing ones it's very hard to choose... your amazing. love ya lots! -E

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